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Brianna the Hedgehog by *kakyuuspark:iconkakyuuspark:

Categories Fan Art > Traditional Art > Drawings > Games

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Brianna the Hedgehog (c) :icondiloshstar:.

Drawn by :iconkakyuuspark:.

I fear I made big mistakes on this pic.

Can you point it out :?

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*Diloshstar Oct 22, 2009, 9:27:22 AM
:iconiloveitplz: she looks lovely :D Thank you so much :hug: I like the new look you gave to her legwarmers :)
Now, I want to give you some critiques. Your coloring looks nice. But on some parts, it has white spots. You should color your drawings on a straight place(i.e., on paper or a notebook cover made out of paper.).
Her hair looks a little too sharp. Even if they are spines, she originally has curly spines. And her eyes' pose looks a little weird.
The beginning of her arms look a little weird. Her fingers look a little sharp and shapeless. Her left leg curves a little weird and it's top is thinner than her right leg. And her shoes look a little tiny.
But other than, I love the drawing and I hope my critique isn't harsh ^^;
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~shnoogums5060 Oct 21, 2009, 5:47:06 PM
Wow. This is pretty. She can join the Sonic Team for the next olympic video game with Mario & Sonic on it, as far as i can tell, Gio.

Nice job, man.

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~StatX015 Oct 21, 2009, 5:47:38 PM
nice work.

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~Omen333 Oct 21, 2009, 5:47:49 PM
Just even things out a bit and you should be good. Like draw a main cicrle for the head then three smaller ones by the bottom to form the muzzle. That's about it ^^
Still think it's a good atempt picture!

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Than lightning be
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*kakyuuspark Oct 21, 2009, 5:51:03 PM
Thank you :)

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*kakyuuspark Oct 21, 2009, 5:51:20 PM
Thank you,Stat :)

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*kakyuuspark Oct 21, 2009, 5:51:38 PM
Thank you :)

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~JollyLink Oct 21, 2009, 5:55:03 PM
shes cute : DDDD

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~Omen333 Oct 21, 2009, 6:02:14 PM
no prob...I hope I ddin't sound rude or anything T-T

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Stay closer, be brighter
Than lightning be
Be frightning, be lighter
Than lightning be.
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*kakyuuspark Oct 21, 2009, 6:05:55 PM
No you didn't ^^

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*kakyuuspark Oct 21, 2009, 6:06:53 PM
Anytime :)

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